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LOL OW's POEM

Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 9:18 pm
by palmboy5
TOO BAD I'M DUMB AND URE SMART
AND URE COOL AND IM NOT
AND U KNOW I GOT TO PARKS
DO U PARK IN PARKING LOTS?!

I KNOW THERE WAS A DAY
WHERE U WANTED TO SAY
OH I LOOOVE U SO MUCH
BUT THEN THE GUY WENT *PUNCH*

SO THEN U FELL ON THE FLOOR
AND SOMEBODY KNOCKED ON THE DOOR
U OPENED IT AND TO UR SURPRISE
IT WAS A SKATEBOARD

A LETTER WAS ON IT, ADDRESSED TO U
U OPEN IT AND IT SAID
"ROSES REALLY SMELL LIKE POO POO"

U TOSSED THE LETTER AWAY
AND ADMIRIRED THE SKATEBOARD
U GASPED AND U WANTED TO SAY
OH THANK YOU LORD!!!

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:31 pm
by Q12321
Normally when I see half-assed, shitty "art" like this, I can usually say that I've heard worse, but this one is at the top of the shit list.

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 5:16 pm
by palmboy5
egggzactly!

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 6:34 pm
by Guest
ROFLMAO Q. OMG that was classic dawg

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 7:32 pm
by palmboy5
it was? hm.... u LIAR

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 8:11 pm
by Guest
he pwned her dawg

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:08 pm
by oW_bAby
shut the fuck up you bastards. i made that poem in practically 30 seconds

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:15 pm
by Q12321
"No excuse is better than a bad one."
-George Washington

Saying that you did it in 30 seconds doesn't hide the fact that it is a piece of shit.

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:27 pm
by oW_bAby
hahaha did I say that it was good at all? I'm just saying that i did it in 30 seconds and you shouldn't expect much from it. I thought you would catch on

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:33 pm
by Q12321
Sorry, I forgot that anything made in 30 seconds or less shouldn't be that great. But then again, I can make microwavable bacon in 20 seconds... Well, as far as catching on goes. Yeah, it's one thing when someone notices something that isn't that great, and then someone telling that one person that they had half-assed the whole thing. It's a completely different thing when you make a piece of shit poem, show it to someone, allow them to post it for anyone with internet access to see, and then get bitchy when someone like me feels like being an arrogant ass, which I love to be by the way.

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:40 pm
by palmboy5
Q got it pretty straight on ;)

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:42 pm
by philp
oW_bAby wrote:hahaha did I say that it was good at all?
Actually, you didn't have a comment on it. Actually, you didn't even post the poem. :roll:

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:51 pm
by oW_bAby
I know phil. I said it was ok if palm put it on, I already knew one of you were going to go bitchy, not like I didn't know it was coming

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:54 pm
by oW_bAby
Oh and Q, yeah I WAS being bitchy since you were being an ass which you love being, so why couldn't I be a bitch? Yeah, i could.. so I did

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:54 pm
by philp
And that's the beauty of art and literature. Unless you plan to make a living at it, why care what anyone thinks of your work?