LOL OW's POEM

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#1 Post by **palmboy5** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 9:18 pm

TOO BAD I'M DUMB AND URE SMART
AND URE COOL AND IM NOT
AND U KNOW I GOT TO PARKS
DO U PARK IN PARKING LOTS?!

I KNOW THERE WAS A DAY
WHERE U WANTED TO SAY
OH I LOOOVE U SO MUCH
BUT THEN THE GUY WENT *PUNCH*

SO THEN U FELL ON THE FLOOR
AND SOMEBODY KNOCKED ON THE DOOR
U OPENED IT AND TO UR SURPRISE
IT WAS A SKATEBOARD

A LETTER WAS ON IT, ADDRESSED TO U
U OPEN IT AND IT SAID
"ROSES REALLY SMELL LIKE POO POO"

U TOSSED THE LETTER AWAY
AND ADMIRIRED THE SKATEBOARD
U GASPED AND U WANTED TO SAY
OH THANK YOU LORD!!!

Q12321 · #2 Post by **Q12321** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:31 pm

Normally when I see half-assed, shitty "art" like this, I can usually say that I've heard worse, but this one is at the top of the shit list.

#3 Post by **palmboy5** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 5:16 pm

egggzactly!

Guest · #4 Post by **Guest** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 6:34 pm

ROFLMAO Q. OMG that was classic dawg

#5 Post by **palmboy5** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 7:32 pm

it was? hm.... u LIAR

Guest · #6 Post by **Guest** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 8:11 pm

he pwned her dawg

oW_bAby · #7 Post by **oW_bAby** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:08 pm

shut the fuck up you bastards. i made that poem in practically 30 seconds

Q12321 · #8 Post by **Q12321** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:15 pm

"No excuse is better than a bad one."
-George Washington

Saying that you did it in 30 seconds doesn't hide the fact that it is a piece of shit.

oW_bAby · #9 Post by **oW_bAby** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:27 pm

hahaha did I say that it was good at all? I'm just saying that i did it in 30 seconds and you shouldn't expect much from it. I thought you would catch on

Q12321 · #10 Post by **Q12321** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:33 pm

Sorry, I forgot that anything made in 30 seconds or less shouldn't be that great. But then again, I can make microwavable bacon in 20 seconds... Well, as far as catching on goes. Yeah, it's one thing when someone notices something that isn't that great, and then someone telling that one person that they had half-assed the whole thing. It's a completely different thing when you make a piece of shit poem, show it to someone, allow them to post it for anyone with internet access to see, and then get bitchy when someone like me feels like being an arrogant ass, which I love to be by the way.

#11 Post by **palmboy5** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:40 pm

Q got it pretty straight on

philp · #12 Post by **philp** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:42 pm

oW_bAby wrote:hahaha did I say that it was good at all?

Actually, you didn't have a comment on it. Actually, you didn't even post the poem.

oW_bAby · #13 Post by **oW_bAby** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:51 pm

I know phil. I said it was ok if palm put it on, I already knew one of you were going to go bitchy, not like I didn't know it was coming

oW_bAby · #14 Post by **oW_bAby** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:54 pm

Oh and Q, yeah I WAS being bitchy since you were being an ass which you love being, so why couldn't I be a bitch? Yeah, i could.. so I did

philp · #15 Post by **philp** » Thu Sep 16, 2004 9:54 pm

And that's the beauty of art and literature. Unless you plan to make a living at it, why care what anyone thinks of your work?