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Judge my writing.
Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2005 5:07 pm
by neuralmop
Recently I wrote a hack of a story for English. It's here.
http://www34.brinkster.com/restin256/procession.txt
Written on a high of industrial rock. It was written due to me not being able to finish and shorten another story by the deadline (I'm still working on it). Here.
http://www34.brinkster.com/restin256/ruinner.htm
Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2005 5:45 pm
by Directive
Well, this is what I got when I clicked the first link:
HTTP1.1 STATUS 403 Remote Access to this object forbidden
<html>
<head><title>Direct Access Forbidden</title></head>
<b>This file cannot be directly accessed from a remote site, but must be linked through the Brinkster Member's site.</b></body></html>
The second link works fine. So far its not to bad.
Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2005 7:00 pm
by palmboy5
through glance it looks to the format of other stories, which is good XD
Posted: Sat Jan 29, 2005 3:12 pm
by neuralmop
Heh, I'll need to fix that.
Thanks about the second one, though.
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 3:55 pm
by neuralmop
http://www34.brinkster.com/restin256/procession.htm
You have to close the image to the right, though. Today in English my teacher read that to the class and said we should make a short film about it, but I don't know how to go about killing someone like that with improvised special effects..
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 4:03 pm
by palmboy5
o.O;; i should read these things ^^
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 5:01 pm
by neuralmop
Well, you could just watch the movie when it comes out..
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 5:28 pm
by palmboy5
LOL with a buncha weird freaks? nah ^^